Keeping it safe or making it right...
I knew Tempted was going to be trouble as soon as I finished it.
I thought about changing it. Making it safer. Making it something it wasn't meant to be in order to avoid fallout.
But in the end, I didn't.
I only had a small kernel of an idea when I started it. A woman and her husband, best friend comes to visit, they begin a relationship, but not just because the friend is interested in the wife. He's interested in the husband, too.
So...how could I make that work?
I had a tight deadline and nothing but a vague idea of what was going to happen. But...tight deadline. Being late is not an option for me, barring death or dismemberment. So. I worked. I worked hard. I managed my personal best writing days to date. The words poured out of me, and the story took place.
Tempted (which was called Perfect when I submitted it) was many things. Easy isn't one of them. It wasn't easy to write. I'm sure it's not "easy" to read. It's not a light-hearted book, nor is it fluffy. Nor would I say it's a romance, though I understand it's in the romance section of the store and some would assume it is. (Sorry, I can't control where they put the books! I wish I could!)
But another thing Tempted isn't is safe. I knew the ending would not appeal to some readers. I knew it as soon as I typed the words. But those words, that ending SATISFIED me. It was, after the end of weeks of writing, the only way this book could end and make sense.
There were other choices. I could have given it a "happy" ending -- though to be honest, I'm not really sure what that would have been. Alex and Anne? Anne and James? James and Alex? Anne and Alex and James? I had choices, but three of those four did not work. They didn't make sense.
They weren't right.
They might have been "safer." They might have been "happier." They might have been something else, but they wouldn't have been right.
So I wrote Tempted and I gave it the only ending that made sense to me. It wasn't sunshine and flowers but it's hopeful -- at least to me. It was realistic -- to me. It was what I knew would work out the best for all the characters, in the long run, and it wasn't based on a whim but what I'd created for all of them. I built them from scratch, those two men and that woman, and at the end of it, I did my best to give all three of them what they needed.
To me, there is nothing more romantic than sticking with someone or something that isn't the easy, breezy choice. There's nothing more satisfying, emotionally, than taking something that seems broken and trying to fix it, rather than tossing it aside to try something bright and shiny.
Tempted made sense to me. I'm sorry there are readers who wanted something different from it -- all I can say is, if it wasn't what you expected, it probably wasn't meant to be. Thank you for reading my book and taking the time to express your opinions about it. Thank you for caring enough about my characters to bother thinking about them after you put the book aside.
And...I do write traditional happy endings, too. :)
For the readers who got behind the ending of Tempted, I thank you, too. I'm glad the story worked for you the way it worked for me. I'm glad you enjoyed the ride as much as I enjoyed writing it. Thanks for reading, and I hope you like the next one even though it's got a more traditional romance flavor to it!
Tempted is a book about honesty, and it's an honest book. I couldn't make it anything more than that. Maybe it came from too honest a place in myself, and maybe that's why it doesn't appeal to some readers who are looking for something a little less real. I get that. I understand wanting to read for escape, I do. Heck, it's why I write! And let's face it, not everyone has to like every thing. Maybe if I'd written Tempted a little differently I'd have a thousand more people cheering me on and waving it around as their favorite read of the year!
Maybe I could have made it safer.
But it wouldn't have been right.
M
PS -- Want to win your own signed copy of Tempted? Comment to this entry and I'll pick one winner from all the comments by Thursday, May 15.
Thanks for reading, everyone!
PPS -- I respectfully ask that comments don't give away spoilers! Not that anything's a huge secret, but...you know. ;)




















Loved it
Megan, I think what's amazing about your writing is how honest and thought-provoking it is, but also how there's always a thread of optimism running through it -- hope, as you say. But it's a sophisticated thing -- you are writing outside of the pattern, and there's nothing wrong with that. If people are disappointed, it's their expectations, not your book, that are the culprit.
How books get shelved is annoying, though -- my own bugaboo on this score is always separating out fantasy/paranormal/romance/mysteries which can be stuck just about anywhere, it seems depending on author/title/publisher, etc (and then, finding suspense in the mystery aisle, and under romance, if it's a person whose written suspense, it's chaos) -- but readers need to be be more clued in than to think every book under a certain heading in a bookstore will end the same way. I'm sensing you've gotten some flak on this book, and it's undeserved. If people don't like a book, they should own their response, face that it's something in them that doesn't respond to the story, not blame the author -- especially when so many other people love it.
Sam
Thanks, Sam...but you know
Thanks, Sam...but you know something...I think everyone comes to a book (or film, or tv show or painting or food or shoes or whatever) with their own perceptions and experiences, so nobody's experience with something is ever going to be the same. The best you can hope for is that a reader will like the same things you like as a writer, or expect similar experiences.
It doesn't make anyone wrong for not liking my book -- I want to be clear that I don't think that. Everyone's entitled to an opinion, or to like different things or expect different things from their reading choices.
If anything, I feel I let down the readers who were expecting something different from my books, but at the same time I want to say "...did you read the book I wrote?" Because their reaction is such a polar opposite to what I intended or felt. From just one person, hey, it's an anomaly. From more than one, I have to look at my words and wonder if I somehow failed.
And yet there are enough readers who liked Tempted, who understood or felt the same way I did about it, so I know I didn't fail as a writer. I just failed those readers who were looking for something I didn't do. Which still makes me sad, but I can't fix it, you know?
At the end of the day, I'm glad the book moved them enough, one way or another. I'm sorry if it wasn't their cup of tea, but that's probably because, like I said, it wasn't ever meant to be what they were expecting. I'd rather have someone not like my book because of what it IS than what it is NOT...I'd rather write the book I know I want to write and have some not care for it. At the end of the day, I'm very proud of Tempted and I know it's the book I meant to write and the book I wanted to write; it's the story I wanted to tell and it began and ended the way I meant it to. I'd rather have that than try to write a book and not have it come out the way I knew it should have (whether people ultimately like it that way or not.)
M
No, I know...
But I'm still a hardass in this respect.
It doesn't make someone wrong for not liking your book -- it makes someone wrong for blaming *you* for them not liking your book. ;)
I guess some of my views on this were formed in my teaching days -- a mentor then told me that while I could do backflips in the classroom to try to do my best to get everyone to learn, there would still be people who would criticize my form in the backflips. LOL Her point being that I couldn't take responsibility for everyone else's perceptions, I could only do my best. You drive yourself crazy otherwise.
That's not to say we can't take people's responses and learn -- I would look at students' evaluations, and I could tell how to make a course better, or what I could change -- but you have to separate out legitimate responses from, well, spewing. LOL
So, I don't think you have anything to feel sad about, I suppose. You didn't "fail" anyone.
Sam, that's my story, and I'm sticking to it. ;)
You're right! I know it! Not
You're right! I know it! Not everything can please every person!
I KNOOOOW!!!!
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What a teaser...
I have not yet read Tempted, but of course, I'm certainly intrigued now. Okay...I'll be honest...I've been really wanting to read the book--who wouldn't with a cover like that?--but I've been such a bad girl, buying books when I should be buying, oh, I don't know...food? :)
Seriously, though, I have to admit that I had a hard time getting into Dirty. Not sure what it was, but it took me a couple of weeks to really get rolling and when I did, I stayed up 'til I think four in the morning to finish. I LOVED that story. Easily one of my favorite books ever. Now I'm normally a HEA kind of girl, but what appealed to me most about Dirty wasn't that I kept hoping for a happy-happy ending because I really didn't think Elle and Dan would get one--it was that the story was so damn real. It wasn't fluffed up and pretty and so sweet I could gag--it was dark and painful and honest. I've never been through what Elle has been, but I sure felt like I was while I read her story. That's what I love about your writing. Your stories take me to places I've never been, some I want to be (read: Jack!!), and some I NEVER want to be. In real life anyhow. I wouldn't expect anything less than honest characters and an honest story from you and I actually think I'd be disappointed if you strayed from that.
Kudos to you for remaining true to your writing and your story!
Hugs...
Sassa, thank you! I'm glad
Sassa, thank you! I'm glad you stuck with Dirty long enough to get into it! (And Jack, mmm, Jack...he shows up in Stranger, which is coming out in January!)
I think some people have approached my books expecting them to be ROMMMMMANCES! And there's nothing wrong with that, I love romances. I even write them, sometimes! But my books for Spice are not traditional romances. They don't have that traditional romance slant. I think Dirty had a romantic ending. I think Tempted had the right ending for so many reasons I could list but won't, since I don't want to spoil it. :)
I realistically know I can't please everyone. I know it. But darn it, I want to!
M
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Tempted
Well heck, it's my fav book of the year so far!
This is what I like about Megan Hart books: the emotion.
Sure, they're erotic novels with great sex scenes. Okay, awesome sex scenes. And they have intricate, real-life plots lines that engage a reader and really make her think. Imagine, having to think about a story long after you've read it? I love that.
But the emotion I find in every single sentence is what makes reading these stories such a treat. I haven't read a one yet without crying, or smiling, or even laughing. It's not often I get all that from one book.
Thanks for the great read, Megan!
M
Thank you, Michele! You know
Thank you, Michele!
You know we have the same initials. And we both sign "M."
I SWEAR we are not the same person!
M :)
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Hmmm...
I am intrigued by your blog. Is the ending that shocking that you wanted to write about it?
No, not all books lead to HEA. I prefer them because it is nice to know that there are HEAs out there. Yeah, I know, in real life they would still have to deal with the annoying daily things I deal with but, the fantasy is nice.
I would be more upset if I thought you were pandering. I'd rather have true than trite.
No, the ending isn't
No, the ending isn't shocking at all, ThatBrunette. I mean, I didn't intend it to be. I didn't think it was. I didn't even think it would be a surprise! But apparently, it was, to some people!
Thanks for your comment. I would be more upset if I pandered, too.
m
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Okay, now I want to read this book...
I'm a weirdo, tell me I may not like the ending of a book and I need to read it. Like, immediately. LOL
Megan, IMO, one of the best parts of writing is creating your world. You say what works, what doesn't, and God (or your choice of deity) willing, your readers will remember the ride you took them on. They won't always like it, although it's nice if they do - but the main thing is they will remember your story and your characters. And hopefully, they'll take away something from your writing that will send them up to another bookstore counter with your next book in hand.
You did the right thing for your characters, and isn't that what all writers are striving for? Along with bestsellerdom, lots of contracts, plenty of caffeine and a muse that never sleeps... :)
Cari
You're right Cari. I do
You're right Cari. I do appreciate that the book made people think and talk about the characters and remember them! I truly do.
And if they decide NOT to read more of my books, it's probably just as well, since mostly they're going to be similar and life's too short to read books you already know you won't like. LOL!
M
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:)
Hi Megan,
I've only read a few of your books, but I really liked Tempted. It wasn't quite what I expected, but it worked. I enjoyed the stark quality, and all that uncertainty. Also, I relatively close to where the book was set, so that was fun.
As for the ending... it worked. It made sense. I don't know that ... I liked it, and I like it the way it is, I think I would have just liked it to be a tiny bit happ*ier* if that makes sense.
p.s. - you said the lucky winner will get a signed copy... but will it be caressed too? ;)
It will ABSOLUTELY be
It will ABSOLUTELY be caressed!
And yes, I get what you're saying and completely understand it. I'm not sure I *liked* the ending of Tempted because sure, it would've been nice to tie it all up in a pink ribbon with glitter and butterflies, but you know, it just wasn't that sort of book and that sort of ending would've been...well. Wrong!
And I could've made it more upbeat, happier, whatever, but again...it just felt like the ending was what it had to be.
And...I don't think you always have to like the way something works out in order to enjoy the ride. If that makes sense.
M
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Staying true...
I think is ultimately more important, Megan. I'm glad you were able to write the book and characters so honestly--and I'm sorry that you've gotten flak from readers who perhaps were looking for something else. I agree with Sam though--it isn't your job to provide exactly what everyone's looking for (that's an impossible task, even for an audience of one!) People are going to respond in their own ways to different stories--if I happen to read something that doesn't "click" for me, that isn't anyone's fault! That's just how life is--different stories are going to work for me (or for you or for someone else) for different reasons at different times.
I haven't had a chance to read Tempted yet, and now I'm even more intrigued. (Not to mention that I've been drawn to its eye-catching cover about a million times every time I visit Cigars!)
Anyway, thanks for writing, Megan, and keep on doing it!
Thanks, fedora! I feel the
Thanks, fedora! I feel the same way. I might like a book someone hates, or vice versa. But it has to be a really, really, HORRIBLE book (badly written, etc.) for me to say I'll nevarrrrrrrr read that author again!!!
M
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It was just right
I actually just finished this book a few days ago. And I think your ending was true to the book and the characters.
Yes, there were a lot of ways you could have taken it but if you'd gone in any of those other directions it wouldn't have been right to this story and these characters.
I really enjoyed it. Scratch that. In some ways it wasn't enjoyable. But I'm happy that I read it.
I hope that makes sense.
ani
Ani, thanks for reading
Ani, thanks for reading Tempted. I know, some parts of it weren't meant to be "fun." LOL!!
Thanks for reading anyway, and I'm glad you were able to get value from it.
M
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Romance and endings
I didn't really think about the endings to romance novels until I started writing them...sad, but true. If I can take something for granted and forget about it, I do. ;) I've got two functioning neurons most days...HEA? Check. Moving on to something more complicated, like not backing over the trash cans.
That said, I've learned while writing romances over the last year that I like a little reality with my fantasy, and the ending to Tempted falls squarely in that category. Squarely. No butterflies or glitter, but a little reality. That made the ending satisfying for me. In fact, all your Spice books feel that way to me. I liked how Dan and Elle show up in Broken, still working on their relationship, because that's reality. Love won't solve everything. I'm not sure it solves ANYTHING, but the experience of love is gift enough. Fifteen years into my own marriage I feel more proud of and gain more strength from making it through the tough times than I do from that "a-ha" moment I had when I first saw him and knew I was going to marry him.
Hey, booklover. I agree!
Hey, booklover. I agree! Sticking with something, even when it's been tarnished...THAT is love. To me, anyway.
M
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I've always said
Give me the romance that starts when they've been married ten years. Three kids, and an untrained puppy. A car and a washing machine that are both about to fall apart and not--quite--enough money to fix one, let alone both.
Maybe his hair is starting to fall out (or grow out of his ears) and she hasn't got the same figure she did before kids.
Where the idea of getting a full night of sleep is, sadly, more exciting than making love.
Now turn that into a romance to show all of us who have been there/done that how to change things around and it would be a best seller!
ani
LOL! OKay, I'll put it on
LOL!
OKay, I'll put it on my list!
M
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